Friday, October 10, 2025

Return to Saltair Pavilion -- another nightmare at the carnival of souls

The wind off the Great Salt Lake always carried a particular chill, a whisper of brine and forgotten things. For Elara, it also carried the ghost of a laugh, the echo of a nightmare she’d buried for twenty years. Saltair Pavilion, a skeletal marvel of Victorian architecture, loomed on the horizon, its domes and turrets silhouetted against a bruised, twilight sky. It was meant to be a place of joy, a “Coney Island of the West,” but for Elara, it was the site of the Carnival of Souls, and the place where her younger sister, Lily, had vanished without a trace.

Twenty years ago, the Carnival of Souls had rolled into Saltair, a gaudy spectacle of faded tents, rusty rides, and barkers with eyes too bright. Lily, vibrant and fearless, had dragged Elara to the Ferris wheel, its creaking metal groaning like a dying beast. They’d ridden it twice, laughing, before Lily spotted the House of Mirrors – “The Labyrinth of Lost Reflections,” it was called. Elara had felt a strange dread then, a cold prickle on her skin, but Lily, ever curious, had darted inside. Elara followed, but within the shimmering maze of glass, Lily simply… wasn’t there anymore. Just Elara, her own distorted face staring back from a hundred angles, and the sudden, chilling silence.

Now, a cryptic invitation had arrived, a yellowed ticket for "Saltair's Grand Reopening: The Carnival of Souls Returns." It was addressed to Elara, and scrawled on the back, in Lily’s familiar looping script, were two words: Come back.

Against her better judgment, Elara found herself driving down the familiar, desolate road. The pavilion looked even more decrepit up close, its once-grand façade scarred by decades of abandonment. The air was thick with the sickly sweet smell of stale popcorn and something else… something metallic and ancient. The carnival, a phantom limb of her memory, was there. The Ferris wheel, painted in lurid new colors, spun slowly, empty gondolas swaying in the wind. The "Labyrinth of Lost Reflections" sign, faded but unmistakable, stood at the pavilion’s entrance, beckoning her into the maw of her past.

Inside, the pavilion was a cavernous space, dimly lit by strings of flickering bulbs. It was mostly empty, save for a few shadowy figures milling about. The air was heavy, as if saturated with unspoken stories. Elara moved through the echoing halls, the sound of her own footsteps amplified, each creak of the floorboards a ghostly whisper. She saw the familiar arcades, the dilapidated bumper cars, the forgotten candy stands. But everything was subtly wrong – a carousel horse with vacant, human-like eyes, a fortune teller’s booth where a tattered curtain rustled as if someone had just slipped away, leaving only a lingering scent of dust and despair.

She found herself drawn to the "Labyrinth of Lost Reflections." The entrance was draped with heavy velvet curtains, and a low hum vibrated from within. Pushing them aside, she stepped into the mirror maze. It was just as she remembered, a disorienting kaleidoscope of her own image, warped and twisted. But this time, something new was present. In the reflection next to her, she saw a flicker of movement, a small, childlike hand waving from a deeper part of the maze. Lily.

Elara plunged deeper, calling Lily’s name, her voice swallowed by the labyrinth. The reflections twisted her, elongated her, made her seem like a creature from a nightmare. She saw Lily again, clearer this time, beckoning her, her face filled with an unearthly glow. But as Elara reached out, the reflection shimmered, and Lily’s face contorted into something monstrous, a silent scream frozen in glass. The hand she’d reached for now clawed at the mirror, long, sharp nails leaving streaks that weren’t quite scratches, but seemed to bleed.

Suddenly, the mirrors around her began to crack, spiderwebbing with fractures. The reflections splintered into a thousand jagged shards, each one showing a different, distorted version of Elara’s terror. A low, guttural laugh echoed through the maze, not Lily’s, but something ancient and malevolent. From the depths of the labyrinth, a figure emerged. It was tall, impossibly thin, its skin stretched taut over sharp bones. Its eyes glowed with a cold, pale light, and its mouth was a permanent, gaping rictus, like a broken ventriloquist's dummy.

This was not a clown, not a carny. This was the true master of the Carnival of Souls, the entity that fed on lost reflections and stolen laughter. It was the thing that had taken Lily, that had waited two decades for Elara to return. It raised a long, skeletal hand, and a wave of pure dread washed over Elara. The mirrors around her shattered completely, raining down razor-sharp glass. But as she fell, she didn’t feel the pain. She felt a cold embrace, a sensation of being pulled into a thousand different pieces, her own reflection scattering into the echoing darkness.

The Carnival of Souls continued its eternal, silent spin. And somewhere, deep within the fractured glass of the Labyrinth of Lost Reflections, a new, distorted image of Elara joined the spectral, laughing face of her sister, forever a part of Saltair’s nightmare.

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